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1st, put the epilogue back in, then add the idea that maybe he'll end up being a muse. And isn't it funny, since he could never be a great poet, or even a famous poet, if whatever jerkoff he's the muse of gets famous off of his story? Wouldn't that be something?

2nd, think about doing some editing. CLOWN ain't perfect, and culling the weakest parts might make it MUCH better than it is.